Learning Intentions for Science
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Literacy
As part of our rocky shore unit we will also use our literacy skills to read and learn about the rocky shore and to write an information report on a rocky shore creature.
Writing
We are learning to write an information report about an animal.
We are learning to use our writing skills across the curriculum.
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Wednesday, 4 April 2018
Rocky Shore Recount
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Well done for writing a great recount Ethan. I like that you put your events in order and that you told the reader which creatures you saw. I also liked how you described exploring the cave, you told me about the different skulls and you described catching the shrimp. Your next step is to try and use some more interesting words in your writing. It was great that you provided lots of photos and that you labeled them with which creatures they showed. Well done.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you added detail and the slides look really cool.
Next time could you add some more writing about the trip
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