The Lightning Never Strikes Twice

WALT use adjectives and similes to describe a setting clearly

The scary windmill started to creek until “KABOOM THE THUNDER STRUCK,” then it felt like I was in heaven a massive flash of lighting struck and made me blind. I was lucky it was only one eye so I quickly ran into the windmill d٥٥ዪ but I was lucky enough it was unlocked. When I got in side It had looked like the silky sky darker than ever. It also smells like a wet dog. When I opened one of the room doors I imagined someone had lived here, when I looked under the bed it was the persons skull. When the thunder storm had finished I ran away and never went for a walk again.

20 years later,

I changed my mind and took a walk but guess where I went, exactly back to the windmill, and the same thing happens again but this time the skull was mine.