Descriptive Writing

At the moment in class, we have been working on descriptive writing. We have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. Here is a piece of writing I did.    Here is a link to the drive I used.

THAT ONE DAY

One day I was wondering around the city of the Big Apple (New York).
Then I heard thud noises. I was thinking in my head what it was?
I thought it was a dragon. But then I saw a creature come around a corner; it was a dinosaur! A big T-Rex, with big white teeth and flesh hanging out of its mouth.

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When it came down the street that I was on, it smashed its
head on the building next to me! Glass shattered down on me.
It felt like it was hailing. The T-Rex started to eat people and picked
up trees and cars were being crushed by the T-Rex's teeth. People were
screaming in pain and horror. The dinosaur looked at me eye to eye and let
out a massive, “ROAR!” Then walked off. It felt like my heart was going 100
miles an hour.

Then it walked on the Brooklyn Bridge. It crushed the bridge down
into the water and the dinosaur went with it. That was the last day
for that dangerous dinosaur.